Thursday, February 16, 2012

Juliet's Mind

My mind escapes from thy love no more.
The night when I first met thee,
I fell in love with thy sweet words.
I tried to say fare-the-well,
For, alas, thy name a Montague.
O' Romeo, I tried, I tried,
But my mind won't let go.
So I followed my mind,
Together we become husband and wife.
O' Romeo,
On Earth or Heaven
I will love thou forever
Like two lovebirds,
Loving till death do them apart.
http://afunnyanimal.blogspot.com/2011/09/beautiful-love-birds-wallpapers.html
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  1. Ms. Ewert's English BlogFebruary 16, 2012 at 8:49 PM

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  2. Ms. Ewert's English BlogFebruary 16, 2012 at 9:13 PM

    I really enjoy how you created this poem from Juliet's mind. By doing so, you really take away all words and provide the audience with a mental image that is very powerful... As well, I think the picture is very cute. The only thing missing is your constraint. Overall, good job.

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    1. Ylime SieFebruary 16, 2012 at 11:12 PM

      Thank you. And I'm so sorry, but I forgot to put my constraint. My constraint is not to use the word "and"

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